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Fixed landing page headline to be less divisive. Related to #20.
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 * Identified the "Who" more appropriately (as the community).
 * Reworded the "ailing financial infrastructure" statement.
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msporny committed Jan 10, 2014
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Expand Up @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ <h1>Web Payments</h1>
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<h2>Who</h2>
<p>The people that built the Web are now building payments into its core. 2.4 billion people stand to benefit.</p>
<p>An open community of Web technologists is building payments into the core architecture of the Web. 2.4 billion people stand to benefit.</p>
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<h2>Why</h2>
<p>The Web can help us heal our ailing financial infrastructure and create a more equitable future for all of us.</p>
<p>The Web is going to play key role in achieving a resilient financial infrastructure and creating a more equitable future for all of us.</p>
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