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@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ <h3>Full Stack Developer</h3>
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-            <p><b>Age:</b> 21</p>
+            <p><b>Age:</b> 22</p>
             <p><b>Email:</b> nirbhaymeghpara123@gmail.com</p>
             <p><b>Phone:</b> +91 000 12580</p>
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@@ -138,10 +138,7 @@ <h4>BENTLEY UNIVERSITY</h4>
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               <h4>Master in Computer Science</h4>
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-                A master's in computer science prepares graduates for lucrative, high-level
-                careers in computer and information technology (IT). Computer scientists design
-                new computer technologies to solve problems in business, healthcare, science,
-                and education.
+                A Master's in Computer Science delves into advanced practical applications of computer science principles. This program equips students with specialized knowledge in areas like software engineering, data analysis, and artificial intelligence. It develops skills in designing robust solutions for real-world challenges, enhancing employability in industries such as software development, cybersecurity, and data science.
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@@ -156,10 +153,7 @@ <h4>MARWADI UNIVERSITY</h4>
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               <h4>Bachelor in Computer Science</h4>
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-                Bachelor's programs in computer science (CS) cover the theoretical and
-                mathematical underpinnings of computing. Schools offer various degree titles,
-                including bachelor of arts in computer science and bachelor of applied science
-                in computer science.
+                A Bachelor's in Computer Science provides a solid foundation in algorithms, programming, and computational theory. This degree prepares students to design and develop software solutions, covering areas like data structures, databases and AI. Graduates are equipped for careers in software development, cybersecurity, data analysis, and related fields with hands-on experience through projects and internships.
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@@ -171,13 +165,10 @@ <h3><span>Work Experience</span></h3>
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-              <h4>MEAN STACK DEVELOPER (INTERN) &nbsp; | &nbsp; 2022 - Present</h4>
+              <h4>MEAN STACK DEVELOPER &nbsp; | &nbsp; 2022 - Present</h4>
               <h5>Elluminati.Inc</h5>
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-                I am responsible for designing, building, and optimizing websites and other
-                software applications. As a intern,I used to perform a certain tasks that
-                includes designing website, learning advance concepts by appropriate the
-                guidance of a professionals
+                I am responsible for developing RESTful APIs and ensuring their seamless integration with Angular application components, while also optimizing application performance. During my internships, I gained experience in designing, building, and optimizing websites and other software applications. I undertook specific tasks and learned advanced concepts under the guidance of professionals.
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