Fix typos, add note and rephrase sentences and commands #19
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| Now that we've successfully compiled a program and executed it within the context of our Arch VM, let's dig into the details of how an Arch [program] is written and discuss some best practices. | ||
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| In this section, we'll guide you through the basics of writing functions and handling input parameters effectively within a demo program: [GraffitiWall]. | ||
| To illustrates the basic process involved in developing an Arch [program] we're going to build, deploy and interact with a demo program: [GraffitiWall]. |
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This English doesn't make sense. I think it's a typo or something's missing.
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My bad, It's the s in illustrates
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Is this better?
To illustrate the process involved in developing an Arch [program] we're going to build, deploy and interact with a demo program: [GraffitiWall].
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It uses program twice which also doesn't read well, but we can probably remove that second program and just say "interact with our demo app," with the final result being:
To illustrate the basic process involved in developing an Arch [program], we're going to build, deploy and interact with our demo app: [GraffitiWall].
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| # Building, deploying and interfacing | |||
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| Now that all of the dependencies are installed and we have successfully chosen a [development track], we can finally discuss program development, including compiling, deploying and interacting with it. | |||
| Now that all of the dependencies are installed and we have successfully chosen a [development stack], we can finally discuss program development, including compiling, deploying and interacting with it. | |||
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I think @waymobetta meant track because there were two different tracks in the documentation, but I'm not sure if that's still accurate.
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I'm good with this if you're modifying this to refer to them as stacks as I'm not too picky on the nomenclature.
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Yes, good find, this is from an older version of the docs that needs to be updated.
@Perelyn-Arch can you reprahase to the following:
Now that all of the dependencies are installed and we have successfully started our [development stack], we can finally discuss program development, including compiling, deploying and interacting with it.
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