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TEAMMATES 14th STePS poster 2019 #88

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amrut-prabhu opened this issue Apr 8, 2019 · 7 comments
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TEAMMATES 14th STePS poster 2019 #88

amrut-prabhu opened this issue Apr 8, 2019 · 7 comments

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@amrut-prabhu
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amrut-prabhu commented Apr 8, 2019

teammates-steps-poster.zip

teammates-steps-2019.pdf

teammates-steps-2019


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TEAMMATES-2019.pdf

teammates-steps-2019.zip

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damithc commented Apr 8, 2019

Looks good. I'm OK to print it as it is.

Other things you can consider (optional):

  • Show logos for the tech stack?
  • No need for the project ID to be so big.
  • The screenshot in the phone can be made more meaningful. Also, use a more modern phone?
  • 350, 000 users
  • the list '12 weeks' etc. can be mistaken as representing the entire project rather than that happened during the semester. Can be merged with the 'What we did" heading.

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Just a few suggestions:

  • Spotted typo on the mentor name: "Joanne Ong" instead of "Joanne On"
  • Put more space between the company logos? (especially ubisoft vs PSA)
  • Put less space between 290 and "releases"?

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tanhengyeow commented Apr 8, 2019

Thanks for helping out with this 😄

Just a few comments on top of what was mentioned. Some may or may not be that important, your call :)

  1. Might be better to list out the point forms of What We Did in alphabetical order, for example, all the "Added ...." first followed by other points.
  2. The font and spacing of What We Did seems a little off, for example, it seems to have a lot of space in between the words.
  3. The S in TEAMMATES seems a little cut off from the rest of the letters. Perhaps it's the font choice but if it's hard to fix, no worries.

@amrut-prabhu
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@damithc Made some changes, which can be seen in the updated PR description.

@monmanuela @tanhengyeow Since I'm kinda busy now, I've added the updated source files so that you can make changes yourselves, if there's anything else :)

(you can download a free trial of Adobe Indesign if you don't have it)

Changes made:

  • Show logos for the tech stack?
  • No need for the project ID to be so big.
  • The screenshot in the phone can be made more meaningful.
    Comment: Is it better now?
  • Also, use a more modern phone?
  • 350, 000 users
  • Merge '12 weeks' with the 'What we did" heading.
  • Spotted typo on the mentor name: "Joanne Ong" instead of "Joanne On"
  • Put more space between the company logos? (especially ubisoft vs PSA)
  • Put less space between 290 and "releases"?
  • Might be better to list out the point forms of What We Did in alphabetical order.
    Comment: I think some ordering based on importance/difficulty of tasks is better (which is the current design) 😶
  • The font and spacing of What We Did seems a little off, for example, it seems to have a lot of space in between the words.
  • The S in TEAMMATES seems a little cut off from the rest of the letters.
    Comment: That's the official logo, isn't it?

@damithc
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damithc commented Apr 10, 2019

If it helps, you can try to apply the guideline that says there should be a small number of dominant alignment lines if that helps.
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@amrut-prabhu
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there should be a small number of dominant alignment lines

@damithc Updated the image in the description, according to the 2 red lines that you pointed out.

Can I get your final approval now before I proceed to print it?

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damithc commented Apr 10, 2019

Can I get your final approval now before I proceed to print it?

Go ahead. 👍

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