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Clean up some sentences #1

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gregmacfarlane opened this issue Oct 31, 2023 · 0 comments

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gregmacfarlane commented Oct 31, 2023 •

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From reviewer 1:

P11, L3-6, commentary on specific agency practices
P14, L30-32, policy recommendation directed at specific agency.
P14 L8, check sentence composition.
P14 L29, check sentence composition.

Reviewer 5:

figure 1 looks a bit chaotic for my taste and could maybe be re-arranged to understand the content quicker
pp9 line 1 there is an "e" missing in "Too_le"
pp9 line 28 this sentence is incomplete
pp 10 figure 2- this map could look nicer. the points are hard to distinguish and overlap too much, please add a scale as well

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          Change colors in diagram, address #1

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          Fix typo in Tooele, addresses #1

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